第 29 章 分詞構句 (Participial Phrases) - 濃縮句子的進階寫作魔法

分詞構句 (Participial Phrases) - 濃縮句子的進階寫作魔法

在前面的章節中,我們學會了使用連接詞和關係子句來組合句子,例如:

  • The man, who was wearing a hat, looked suspicious.
  • Because he felt tired, he went to bed early.

這些都是完全正確的句子。然而,在更正式或更精煉的寫作中,有一種「語法魔法」可以將這些子句「濃縮」,讓句子更簡潔、更有力。這個魔法,就是分詞構句 (Participial Phrase)。本章將帶您學習如何建構與使用這個強大的語法工具,讓您的寫作技巧更上一層樓。

第一節:什麼是分詞構句?

分詞構句是一個以分詞 (V-ing 或 p.p.) 開頭的片語,它在句子中扮演「形容詞」或「副詞」的角色,用來修飾名詞或整個主要子句。

29.1 分詞構句的構成規則

要將一個從屬子句(形容詞子句或副詞子句)簡化成分詞構句,請遵循以下步驟:

  • 確認主詞相同: 這是使用分詞構句的絕對前提——從屬子句與主要子句的主詞必須完全相同。
  • 刪除連接詞與主詞: 將從屬子句的「連接詞」(如 because, when, who)和「主詞」刪除。
  • 決定分詞形式 (-ing vs. p.p.):
    • 主動/進行關係 → 使用現在分詞 (-ing)
    • 被動關係 → 使用過去分詞 (p.p.)

第二節:分詞構句的形容詞功能 (取代形容詞子句)

當分詞構句用來修飾名詞時,它扮演形容詞的角色,通常緊跟在被修飾的名詞後面,相當於一個被簡化了的「形容詞子句」。

A. 用現在分詞 (-ing) 取代「主動」的形容詞子句

  • 原句: The man who is sitting on the bench is reading.
  • 分詞構句: The man sitting on the bench is reading. (坐在長椅上的那個男人正在讀書。)

B. 用過去分詞 (p.p.) 取代「被動」的形容詞子句

  • 原句: The letter which was sent yesterday arrived this morning.
  • 分詞構句: The letter sent yesterday arrived this morning. (昨天寄出的信今天早上到了。)

第三節:分詞構句的副詞功能 (取代副詞子句)

當分詞構句用來修飾整個主要子句時,它扮演副詞的角色,通常放在句首(並用逗號隔開),用來表達「時間」、「原因」、「條件」等邏輯關係。

A. 用現在分詞 (-ing) 取代「主動」的副詞子句

邏輯關係 完整子句 (Full Clause) 分詞構句 (Participial Phrase)
時間 (Time) When I walked into the room, I saw her. Walking into the room, I saw her.
原因 (Cause) Because she felt sick, she didn't go to school. Feeling sick, she didn't go to school.
條件 (Condition) If you turn right, you will find the post office. Turning right, you will find the post office.

B. 用過去分詞 (p.p.) 取代「被動」的副詞子句

(通常是省略了 Being 或 Having been)

邏輯關係 完整子句 (Full Clause) 分詞構句 (Participial Phrase)
原因 (Cause) Because he was tired from the trip, he slept early. Tired from the trip, he slept early.
時間 (Time) When he was asked about the problem, he said nothing. Asked about the problem, he said nothing.

語法焦點:完成式分詞 (Having + p.p.)

如果想特別強調分詞的動作「發生在主要子句的動作之前」,可以使用完成式分詞 Having + p.p.

  • After he finished his homework, he went out to play.
    Having finished his homework, he went out to play. (在完成功課之後,他出去玩了。)

第四節:最重要的注意事項:懸吊分詞 (Dangling Modifiers)

這是使用分詞構句時最容易犯、也最需要避免的錯誤!

語法警告:主詞必須一致!

分詞構句(片語)所描述的對象,必須是主要子句的主詞。如果分詞片語的邏輯主詞與主要子句的主詞不一致,就會造成語意不清或荒謬的句子,稱為「懸吊分詞」。

  • 錯誤: Walking down the street, the birds were singing loudly.
    (語意變成「小鳥」在街上走路,這不合邏輯。)
  • 正確: Walking down the street, I heard the birds singing loudly.
    (走路的人是「我」,與主要子句主詞 I 一致。)
  • 正確 (還原為完整子句): As I was walking down the street, the birds were singing loudly.

本章總結與練習

總結:

  • 功能:分詞構句是用 V-ingp.p. 開頭的片語,來簡化「形容詞子句」或「副詞子句」,使文句更簡潔。
  • 前提:兩個子句的主詞必須相同。
  • 形式:主詞與動詞為主動關係,用 -ing;為被動關係,用 p.p.
  • 注意:務必避免「懸吊分詞」的錯誤,確保分詞修飾的對象就是主要子句的主詞。

小練習:

A. 用分詞構句簡化下列句子中的子句:

1. The boy who is playing the guitar is my brother.
→ The boy _______________ the guitar is my brother.

2. The pictures which were taken during the trip are beautiful.
→ The pictures _______________ during the trip are beautiful.

3. Because he was surprised by the loud noise, the baby started to cry.
→ _______________ by the loud noise, the baby started to cry.


B. 將兩句合併為一句含有分詞構句的句子:

4. While I was walking home, I met an old friend.
→ ______________________, I met an old friend.

5. The new employee was confused by the system. He asked many questions.
→ ______________________, the new employee asked many questions.

答案:

A. 1. playing, 2. taken, 3. Surprised

B. 4. Walking home, 5. Confused by the system


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